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Summary: And death shall have no dominion. Companion piece to this fanfic and won’t make much sense without reading that first, but maybe still not with having read it. Plays 1o years after the events of CoE.
Rating: G
Author’s notes: Experimental. Doesn’t resemble the thing I wanted to write at all.
Disclaimer: The moment unicorns are real, I will get the rights on these characters.

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Ain’t no Orpheus (he’s no Eurydice)

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His first impression was black.
His first thought was I’m back.
His first word was “What?”
His first move was to sit up.

His second impression was blue.
His second thought was back from where?
His second word was “Jack?”
His second move was to scramble to the man lying next to him.

His third impression was grey.
His third thought was what happened?
His third word was “Jack?”
His third move was to run his hands through the few grey strands of Jack’s hair he couldn't remember.

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His first impression was black.
His first thought was please.
His first word was “Ianto?”
His first move was to open his eyes.

His second impression was white.
His second thought was He’s here.
His second word was “Hey”.
His second move was to cup Ianto’s cheek.

His third and fourth impression was blue and grey.
His third and fourth thought was I missed you. Missed you so much.
His third and fourth word was “Love you.”
His third and fourth move was to grab Ianto’s tie to pull him down and kiss him.

Date: 15 July 2009 15:52 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rei17.livejournal.com
Ich weiß gar nicht, was du hast. Ich finde es sehr schön. Experimentell ist es auf jeden Fall, aber du fängst in den wenigen kurzen Sätze auf jeden Fall eine Menge ein. Emotionen. Intenstität. Angst. Hoffnung. Liebe. Alles da. =)
Es ist sehr eindringlich. Und überhaupt nicht veriwrrend (auch wenn ich ja schon wusste, was passiert).
Also gerne öfter mal Experimente wagen. ;)

Date: 15 July 2009 16:07 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hope-calaris.livejournal.com
Es ist nur überhaupt nicht das, was ich eigentlich schreiben wollte. Du weißt noch? Das mit Gwen? Und überhaupt ... die nehmen Kirk-Tendenzen an und machen auch nie das, was sie sollen *grummel*

Date: 15 July 2009 16:11 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leviathans-moon.livejournal.com
ok, ich hab mir jetzt ne interpretation überlegt, ich werd sie aber nicht teilen, weil sie falsch sein könnte^^. aber, entsprechend meiner interpretation find ich es gut. mir ist wieder ein bisschen das herz gebrochen, aber auf eine relativ gute art. ich mag die farben, gerade da find ich kann man viel interpretieren. find ich gut^^.
nur komisch fand ich sie nicht, oder meintest du komisch im strange-meaning?

Date: 15 July 2009 17:20 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khalaris.livejournal.com
Hm, mal ein ganz anderes Format... Ist wirklich etwas seltsam, aber es gefällt mir :)

Ah, Dylan Thomas... diesen Spruch hab ich schon immer gemocht...

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